WALT - Write a descriptive story
Success Criteria -
- We will use our 5 senses to describe our mum.
- We will use descriptive words like adjectives, adverbs.
- We should choose our vocabulary carefully.
- We will use figurative language like similes, Metaphor etc.
- We should organise our ideas using the graphic organiser.
- We should re-read our story to make sure it makes sense.
Show not tell -
She brights my heart whenever her cooking takes place
Whenever she smiles she bring joy
Her heart makes my brighten
Her smile make me feel welcome
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Introduction :
Personally -
Description about herself -
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She is Caring, Kind, Amazing, Awesome, Beautiful, Funny
Helpful and all she has done for us.
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Middle :
Strength -
Talent -
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She Loves to Cook our Culture Food and She puts Love and Goodness.
She Clean around the house even in our rooms.
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End :
Conclusion -
Love -
Thanks -
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Thanks For your Love and Appreciation and the time you have spent with me.
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MUM -
The moment I hear my mums voice I think of her, She makes me feel special in so many ways. Whenever I bring homework home she would always help me, when she screams at me I would always feel my eardrum explode.
When her cooking takes place my tummy is always eager for more, But when she doesn’t cook it would just be me and dad cooking something in the microwave. My mum is always creative in her cooking by that I mean so delicious I can’t explain it.
Mum is a special friend to me. Although she would always make me smile or cry it does not matter, even if she screams at me I won’t care because I know she is doing it because she loves me with all her heart.
My mum is caring and kind, she tried her best to keep me happy. When she tells jokes I just could not stop laughing. She is a very funny lady.
Another thing about my mum is that whenever I’m feeling down or angry she will comfort me and even let me cry out into her shoulder.
Whenever she would give me hugs it brings peace into my heart, but to appreciate her caring, love, help and support that I would have to thank her for all she has done for me, knowing that she would be me every single time.
