I am a year 8 student at Glen Innes School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mrs. Tuakoi.
Friday, 24 June 2016
Thursday, 23 June 2016
Thursday, 12 May 2016
MY FAVORITE LADY (Mum)
WALT - Write a descriptive story
Success Criteria -
- We will use our 5 senses to describe our mum.
- We will use descriptive words like adjectives, adverbs.
- We should choose our vocabulary carefully.
- We will use figurative language like similes, Metaphor etc.
- We should organise our ideas using the graphic organiser.
- We should re-read our story to make sure it makes sense.
Show not tell -
She brights my heart whenever her cooking takes place
Whenever she smiles she bring joy
Her heart makes my brighten
Her smile make me feel welcome
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Introduction :
Personally -
Description about herself -
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She is Caring, Kind, Amazing, Awesome, Beautiful, Funny
Helpful and all she has done for us.
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Middle :
Strength -
Talent -
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She Loves to Cook our Culture Food and She puts Love and Goodness.
She Clean around the house even in our rooms.
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End :
Conclusion -
Love -
Thanks -
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Thanks For your Love and Appreciation and the time you have spent with me.
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MUM -
The moment I hear my mums voice I think of her, She makes me feel special in so many ways. Whenever I bring homework home she would always help me, when she screams at me I would always feel my eardrum explode.
When her cooking takes place my tummy is always eager for more, But when she doesn’t cook it would just be me and dad cooking something in the microwave. My mum is always creative in her cooking by that I mean so delicious I can’t explain it.
Mum is a special friend to me. Although she would always make me smile or cry it does not matter, even if she screams at me I won’t care because I know she is doing it because she loves me with all her heart.
My mum is caring and kind, she tried her best to keep me happy. When she tells jokes I just could not stop laughing. She is a very funny lady.
Another thing about my mum is that whenever I’m feeling down or angry she will comfort me and even let me cry out into her shoulder.
Whenever she would give me hugs it brings peace into my heart, but to appreciate her caring, love, help and support that I would have to thank her for all she has done for me, knowing that she would be me every single time.
Friday, 15 April 2016
Room 7 Descriptive Writing - Chocolate Tasting
Chocolate tasting) Descriptive Writing ( BY : ANGEL TEMU)
Smell - Sweet, delight, cocoa powder
Taste - Golden syrup, sugary, Milky, But not that sweet
See - Dark brown , Which is molded into a container which has patterns on the mold.
Feel - Soft with a delight feeling
Hear - In my mouth I could hear a sparkling noise in me.
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The moment I scent the sweet delightful treat, I sat still just waiting for it to get near me. Once I took a piece my brain turned the other way while my mouth exploded with joy, as my taste buds made their way to the moon.
I couldn’t stop jumping up and down because I was to excited, the taste was like golden syrup but sugary and milky but it wasn’t really sweet. To me it felt soft and light but I could hear a sparkling noise just coming from my mouth that made it wanted more.
Thursday, 31 March 2016
Thursday, 18 February 2016
READING - The sons of ma'afu
Who - The two sons Ma'afu Toka and ma'afu lele and Ma’afu are the characters
Where - In a Village called or known as Tonga
What - Happened was that ma'afu two sons through spears around and what happened was that one of the boys hit someone's foot
Why - Because they were trying to have fun but it turned wrong.
How - Because as one of ma'afu son throw it , it had landed in a person's foot but they didn’t know.
In Reading I learnt about how to describe the setting and the character using WHO, WHERE, WHAT, WHY AND HOW.
WHICH D.J
Which D.J
- Copy and Complete this table to show each DJ’s charges for up to 6 hours.
DJ
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Setup fee
$
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1 hour
$
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2 hour
$
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3 hour
$
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4 hour
$
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5 hour
$
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6 hour
$
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DD
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40
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75
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110
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145
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195
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230
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265
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EE
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50
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40
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80
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120
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160
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200
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240
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SS
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0
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50
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100
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150
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200
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250
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300
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2. a. Which DJ is the cheapest for a 2 hour hire? - EE
b. For what period of time Dynamic Dave the cheapest D.J? 1 - 3 hour
How much cheaper is he than the next cheapest for that period? 15
c. For what period of time is EE the cheapest Dj? 1 hou
3. The social committee has $130 to spend on a Dj. To keep within this budget,all three Djs agree to halve their rates for the final hour.
DD - 20 $
EE - 110$
SS - 170$
- What is the maximum time that each Dj will play for $130 or less?
DD - 5 hours
EE - 3 hours
SS - 2 hours
b. Which D.J offers the best value for 130 $ or less?
DD - 5 hours
EE - 3 hours
SS - 2 hoursDuring Maths today our teacher gave us this math problem and we have to work in groups and discuss how to go about solving this problem which I think was a perfect idea. When I was trying to solve it , it was frustrating because it was difficult but Tuakana showed me how to work it out. I am looking forward to solve more problems next time.
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