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Thursday 1 June 2017

How to change the world!!!

Angel                                     R means Reason

How to change the world

Planing

  • Stop people polluting the ocean and air, to keep our sea animals, animals or creatures alive.
R - Because without them we would have nothing.

  • Stop people from cutting or demolishing our native or normal trees.
R - Because if there were less trees than less oxygen so stop.

  • Try make all countries be friendly and stop making wars and so on.
R - To make the relationship between each country happy.

  • Always try your best to help another.
R -  To help people with kindness.

  • Try and make the environment clean.
R - Just so we could live better so by making that happen we need to start by keep the environment clean.

  • Try to help nature grow more in life.
R - without nature we wouldn’t actually be here, because of food and water always comes from nature like trees or plants.

  • Respect nature like home.
R - If we respect nature like home then I guess there would be a better and welcoming place.

  • Try to make a difference in the world.
R - If we try and do the things that I have listed down maybe it would actually make a huge change  in the world.

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Introduction

Must or may have            when you give an statement about the topic
  • Definition
  • Questions
  • Brief description
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Explanation

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  • Three or four or more
  • Explain how it works
  • Explain why it would happen
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Conclusion              When you draw all the information into a summary - retell the story

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  • Comment
  • Summary
  • History
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Introduction -

What would you want for the world? Well I know what I would want  to do for the world I would like to change it with these simple reasons. Why, to make it safe and welcoming for everyone in the entire world.


Explanation -

How it would work? Well according to my point of view I have to persuade people just for them to listen. If you read my explanation i’ll tell you why it would occur. In my belief I say to all builders or construction workers to stop and think about what’s surrounding us. However if you think in your brain how much it would hurt to cut or demolish our native trees or trees then that would be unacceptable.However if they weren’t here then we actually would struggle from more oxygen which would be a disaster for mainly everyone.


Another reason is to stop people from polluting the ocean and air, not just to keep us safe it’s to keep the whole entire nation safe and yes I am talking about animals and sea animals too. If we don’t make it occur to my plan, then animals and sea animals will be in danger towards rubbish, chemicals and so on.

By - Angel Temu ....

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