Angel Fireworks Descriptive Writing 6/11/2017
SEE
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FEEL
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SMELL
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TASTE
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HEAR
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Flashing
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Heat
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Gunpowder
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Smoke
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Screaming
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Colour
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Excitement
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Cheering
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Flaming Balls
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Thrill
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Loud Noises
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Fire
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Whistles
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Success Criteria -
I must use or include the 5 senses
I must use show not tell
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Arriving in a split second to a festival where all of a sudden my heart goes pumping and jumping all over the place with a large smile on its face, then from there I suddenly turn and see beautiful colours flashing while flaming balls flew which I had suggested were shootings stars but while approaching the atmosphere where the event took place, I catch a sudden scent of gunpowder with a taste of smoke added into it!!! but that didn’t really bother me at all. Because having to listen to cheering while the event of fireworks was in process actually made me satisfied and amazed on how the event turned out to eventually be.
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