Descriptive Writing - Organic Blueberries.
Taste
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It was sweet and a bit sour
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Feel
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It was gooey
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Smell
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Like a raisin
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See
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It was frozen
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Hear
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Heard a pop (when I bit it)
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As Mrs Tuakoi strolled around the class giving out organic blueberries I suddenly burst out with excitement, Just waiting for it. Once it reaches to me I suddenly grab two blueberries but it felt so cold like I was holding antarctica in my hands, When I took my first bite it tasted disgusting but juicy, this was a great experience for me.
2 comments:
Hi Angel
I really did like the description you did about organic blueberries. Your description was good, but maybe next time you could use more expensive vocabulary. Well done!
Hi Angel
Your descriptive writing about the blueberries was very interesting in a way because I was hoping for more words on how disgusting you thought it was. I thought it was funny and how would describe the blueberries instead of using disgusting?
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